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there's a few slashes that need to be removed (colored and bolded for emphasis)
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Tan and tan? Should just be saying cum or tan cum.
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perhaps change " you plunge into your elbows" to "you plunge in up to your elbows" otherwise it's a very confusing sentence.
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Shower masturbation scene
there needs to be a hyphen between pre and seed
so pre-seed
