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    Thraggen codex entry formatting 0.9.012

    there's a few slashes that need to be removed (colored and bolded for emphasis)
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    Spelling errors backer-0.9.012

    Grammar suggestion, replace "that" with "the", thus "Your lips caress the ausar woman’s knotted rod ... "
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    Spelling errors backer-0.9.012

    missing space between pretty and boy.
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    Celise Use scene. Backers-0.9.012

    Tan and tan? Should just be saying cum or tan cum.
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    Grammar suggestion Galomax scene

    perhaps change " you plunge into your elbows" to "you plunge in up to your elbows" otherwise it's a very confusing sentence.
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    Spelling errors backer-0.9.012

    Shower masturbation scene there needs to be a hyphen between pre and seed so pre-seed
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    Evil Art

    Getting better, but you need to work on the lighting. Make them softer especially for the bathroom scene.
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    Nonesuch's Catalogue of Smut

    hmm, so five years later has hand so been implemented yet or dropped?