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These are typos I found when playing the last public update. When you are offered the title of Champion of Hawkthorne, only half the paragraph is marked as a dialogue, when all of it is Carmen talking. When you have sex with Zhara in the Wayfort and her sisters cheer you on, one of their...

When you lose your virginity to Evelyn, there a small typo on her dialogue, as well as a missing " and italics to remark the sentence is her dialogue. On her Lick and Footjob scene, one of her dialogies is also lacking italics. Both examples can be seen in the pictures above.

Dreamer44 here. This hub is where you can find my projects and ideas, discuss my content and offer feedback. Don't be shy, I can take criticism. Projects: -Effigy Herald's oral scenes: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nancGz5Z9Ue-odrPSoePwiHLIe3RvYZS8SCSWksDs7s/edit?usp=drivesdk Status...

In that last paragraph it seems to me that there is at least a , missing. "You gather your senses allies and know deep down that..." May need to be reesreuctured a little.