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Ryn>Assfuck>Roughly (Not Buttslut, Also Confirmed when Ryn is a Buttslut that it is still missing) Missing Quotation and Italics

Nursing from the hornet bimbugs pre hive quest “ An idea coming to your mind” doesn’t really make sense in this sentence. “An idea comes to your mind as you kneel down by the nearest bimbug whorenet and heft one of her sumptuous breasts in both hands, testing its weight.”...

", your combined efforts and weights produce tremors that..." two prepositions next to each other ruins the flow of this sentence. "Filling up the poor girl like that and holding her so close to you in a compromising position intended for maximum insemination — really, are you trying to get...

Missing quotations, not in italics.

Specifically with her butt stuff

pretty sure it's supposed to be "She'd look positively fearsome..."

When choosing play naughty some text that shouldn't be italicized is

The first your should probably be omitted hair is said twice here, one should be removed

This section seems like it should be italicized and that the bit after the hyphen should be changed to it really is.

Missing punctuation

Two punctuation marks next to each other

First scene with Livera when you take her out. I am pretty sure that this is supposed to be came instead of can.

Pretty much what the title says

Every so often I will open a shop and they will have the wrong inventory. (Instead showing the inventory of the character I last spoke to I think). Here's an example of Nerrasa having Ellie's inventory. If I close out and reopen the inventory it usually fixes it, but it seems to happen almost...

I think there's one too many and's here

When you go with a Bored Jumper and ask them why pirate? The bust changes to the normal non-preg bust of sometimes a different jumper entirely