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So, dunno how you did this but you took something that had potential, and just turned it upside down and just made it the most boring "I just want to fuck" story possible with this set up, you didn't fix the problems that it had, and instead stripped it of anything that had potential to make it...

You need to go back and change the whole basis of the story your trying to tell, give it a few weeks or months, build up your lore, history and race, it feels more like an abusive voyeurism experience rather than horror, there's no story, no background, and your character has nothing interesting...