https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R1wqOYGrMP1v44DOI_ElZZg4n4t9pWcKlvIObBWoPEA/edit?usp=sharing heres to hoping my slowass connection didnt dick this up
I have no doubt this won't be reviewed in time before the end of the deadline submission, since it's an unholy 25 pages of mess that's still being done even now. Not my greatest planning, but it'll do.
I dunno if because it was in docx, but I have no comments on mine apart from the grading. If anyone could offer a bit of feedback, that'd be great, since I have no idea what to make of fen's comment for the most part.
Not overly spooky but... I had to scrap the original idea. Title: The Rift
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B16dCcA7Glb1dnZPYXNPNVFEZDQ/view?usp=drivesdk