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Ryn is actually pretty sizable. She's really a slender little thing (5'7" isn't short in our world, but here she's practically a sylph). I mean... once uncaged it's about as big as her biceps. I don't think giving her an equine or behemoth cock would be necessary. Maybe if you want a dream scene...

I am more of an editor and 'window-dresser' for others. I can fill in or offer viewpoints for others, but I am not inclined to write sexual scenes myself, though I do love helping others expound upon or clarify their writing to turn the vision in their head into what can be more easily shared...

Thank you for the reply. I was curious while reading over a potential submission for Clementine being done by OreoLuma. There's only the [pregStage] parser listed in the parser doc for her (obviously she doesn't have many), so I believe that's what they went with.

grumble grumble You know... I am a real editor. The specific secret format or hoops they want may be nebulous for specific things... but you get what you pay for. Also... I am purposefully not going to fix your quote above. OCD be damned. I am almost physically pained with these typos and...

It's weird... It's like the comic and art is meant to be read and viewed backwards. I don't think this should be encouraged. It's an affront to how things normally work and are done and accepted; Forward. A story and artwork meant to be viewed back to front?! Right to left?! I mean... I get that...

Wow. That was a long list. I had almost assumed no one ever saw these things after a couple weeks. What happens with things you don't fix? Do you escalate them up a list? Flag them for an author or just... move on?

Read through the new, condensed Mating Press document. Much shorter and a lot less hunting and searching through identical sections to correct typos or grammar, just within a single parser. I noted any typos, grammar, and a few suggestions. Some is opinion, just one person's. Others may disagree.

Why should that be the case? As long as someone isn't claiming it's theirs or they created it. If they have an image they like or wanted to share, it seems okay with me.

Vivianne. The main issue I have is that, really a person is supposed to get corrupted or have a certain attitude and personality (or be driven to it) to the point where they lose their soul. They can keep their personality and such, but having them show altruism and compassion and such except in...

One scene I remember from an anime so very long ago was a pair of nuns disciplining a recalcitrant young lady, purging her of sin. One turns around with a sizable, metal strap-on and says, "We must purge the sin. This holy rod is filled with God's love, so it should feel really good!" I remember...

In the Tychris expansion, you meet a weapon merchant who sells Purple Stars. They're non-unique throwing disks with a lavendar/violet patina and are combat usable. They stack in 10s, so you can just keep collecting and buying and stashing them. [eyeshifts]

In the Tychris expansion, it's discovered the collar doesn't have any such power. She only thought it did. [eyeshifts]

What about an evil character who isn't evil from desire or necessity... but they're under the control of some other-dimensional entity, controlling their actions through a keyboard interface and using them for deviant, sexual gratification?

Then maybe... arm-wrestling? Coin flip (Lyric eats the coin, probably)? Slave-taking challenge. Lyric tries to enslave more orcs than Arona can enslave kobolds in one week? (Champ can help). Either way... it's going to end up in sex for both of them, because my Champ will then have sex with both...

Sex. By focusing their energy on pleasing the most important person in their life.

Kind of goes against the nature of being a phoenix. doesn't it? That's like having a fire elemental become all watery... like some kind of ... wet elemental. Some sort of... watery elemental. What would you even call that?! It's like having a hot dog, but... like, made out of cats instead of...

I like that you had the comic ready to go. Normally, misspelling 'anuses' would drive me crazy, but when I read it like the an old man with an erudite pronunciation whilst holding a pipe between his teeth, I am more amused. "Eight... aihn-uses."

Thus, making me the winner. Now to write a dream scene for that when sleeping in the kitsune den or when you've passed out after a bout of drinking with Takahiro. "Let's goooOOO!!!"

I think it's revealed in the Tychris expansion that Keros, unlike the 'normal' kitsune, has an anus beneath each of his nine tails... and his prostate is linked to each one, requiring them all to be stimulated simultaneously. It's been an existence of disappointment... so he's just given up. If...

Read through the doc. Made one, maybe two suggestions. Tops. Hope some of it helps.