Dragon Sugar = Lunar New Year event Chinese Dragon TF {WIP}

[Angelyn]

I had an idea for a Lunar New Year themed TF item and while I was researching ideas I came across Chinese cotton candy called Dragon's Beard which gave me the idea to make a Chinese dragon TF that is inspired by Dragon's Beard mixed with the appearance and flavors of traditional American cotton candy.

Dragon Sugar Doc {WIP}

 

[Bast]

Can't look at the doc.

 

[Angelyn]

Whoops. I forgot to change it from restricted to available to anyone with the link. Fixed.

 

[Jarylan]

I've had a chance to look at this and I love it to bits. That said, you're missing a couple of things before you can submit it. (You probably already know this, but just in case.)

Body Part Descriptions: You need to describe what the Chinese dragon parts are like. These blurbs are used in character descriptions, like under the appearance tab. Some of these are just draconic, which already have descriptions though.

Adjectives for body parts: Again, already covered for draconic bits. But suggested adjectives to be used for body parts is good. Long, majestic, powerful. Personally I also suggest maybe "noodly" for Silly Mode. XD

 

[Angelyn]

I've had a chance to look at this and I love it to bits. That said, you're missing a couple of things before you can submit it. (You probably already know this, but just in case.)

Body Part Descriptions: You need to describe what the Chinese dragon parts are like. These blurbs are used in character descriptions, like under the appearance tab. Some of these are just draconic, which already have descriptions though.

Adjectives for body parts: Again, already covered for draconic bits. But suggested adjectives to be used for body parts is good. Long, majestic, powerful. Personally I also suggest maybe "noodly" for Silly Mode. XD

Thanks! I'm really glad you like it so much. I know I have a lot of work still left to do but I was so proud of myself for getting this far on it that I wanted to go ahead and get it out there and see what people thought of it so far.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Maybe Regal Mane should be saved for the Eastern Dragon tf that @Angelyn is working on? Or at least the furred version...

 

[Angelyn]

Thanks for the suggestion. I hadn't even thought about adding the Regal Mane perk.

 

[razor777]

Cool, after this one and my dragon TF(if added), the only Regal Mane variants yet to be added to a TF left will be Slime, Goo, Spiked, and Chitin.

 

[Theron]

Cool, after this one and my dragon TF(if added), the only Regal Mane variants yet to be added to a TF left will be Slime, Goo, Spiked, and Chitin.

And Feathers.

 

[razor777]

And Feathers.

Actually Illumorpheme has the feathered variant(I don't know why, it should be furred if anything).

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Well, now that I think about it, wouldn't it be more fitting for an Eastern dragon to have a furry regal mane?

 

[waterpanther7]

i love this should it have a variant tf effect that gives you a serpentine lower body, given that Chinese dragons are long bodied?

 

[valk42]

demon, idk slime

 

[Angelyn]

i love this should it have a variant tf effect that gives you a serpentine lower body, given that Chinese dragons are long bodied?

Thank you. But no. Chinese dragons have four feet so having a serpentine or naga body doesn't match the overall image of the dragon I'm using as a reference.