Ye Shall be as Gods

[Kokayi005]

So let's pop off.

A detective in a society run by a cult worshipping a kid (believe reincarnation of a holy man) comes to confront the cult's temple members after a dead couple is found on the grounds. While investigating the incident the detective stumbles on evidence of other deaths in the basements after picking a lock to get into room the cult didn't want him in. Confronting the kid worshipped in the cult the detective is shocked to discover the kid is supernatural in fact and has real powers. That the rituals done are assisting his ascension so he might guide the people, in his cult and outside, to a promised paradise of prosperity and power. But it's the detective's job to bring the murder(s) to justice for the stake of the law, the peace of mind of the parents of the couple, and their kids, and the police department the detective works for.

Thus the question: Take the kid at his word and overlook the murderous ritual since the kid says it's for a greater good. Or tell the department, hope that the cult member with the dept won't turn on him. Or do some street justice and shoot the kid if he sics his cult on him. Or lie and gather more evidence to out the cult and expose them to the world.

This is how I do my thing.
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I've got a lot of ideas I have bouncing around for the stories I write. But most times things sync with my common focal point of interest.

1) have a message
2) make it epic as fuck (martial arts, magic, high tech weapons, mix it all in, make it a huge world, have plenty of worlds to go to)
3) make sure to make character attractive in looks and in depth of character
4) find a balance, not too much action so story isn't cared for, and not too much drama that action is nonexistent
5) blur the lines but don't cross them (as in kids can die or be hurt, I write for adults and older teens, but I don't do rape or too many other super dark stuff, the point is hope and learning)

I like telekinesis. I like martial arts. I like space. I like magic. I like long quests the traverse a whole planet. Or several like Star Ocean games do. And I don't mean, pop over to a planet, visit one town, then get to a dungeon, the leave planet. No. No way. TRAVERSE THE WHOLE PLANET DAMN IT! (lol)

I would even go so far as to have the detective and his allies outside the department kill the kid. WAY before the end. And this, despite the outcry of the community and being labeled public enemy number one, they continue to try and expose the rest of the cult so no new zealots pop up.

My only problem is, I only wonder if people will see the messages I'm trying to put out there. Especially since games like Xenogears have tried to show the problems with government, religion, and arrogance can get you. But then again, it's not like it's a message that can be told a different way for new audiences.

 

[intityofenergy]

So let's pop off.

A detective in a society run by a cult worshipping a kid (believe reincarnation of a holy man) comes to confront the cult's temple members after a dead couple is found on the grounds. While investigating the incident the detective stumbles on evidence of other deaths in the basements after picking a lock to get into room the cult didn't want him in. Confronting the kid worshipped in the cult the detective is shocked to discover the kid is supernatural in fact and has real powers. That the rituals done are assisting his ascension so he might guide the people, in his cult and outside, to a promised paradise of prosperity and power. But it's the detective's job to bring the murder(s) to justice for the stake of the law, the peace of mind of the parents of the couple, and their kids, and the police department the detective works for.

Thus the question: Take the kid at his word and overlook the murderous ritual since the kid says it's for a greater good. Or tell the department, hope that the cult member with the dept won't turn on him. Or do some street justice and shoot the kid if he sics his cult on him. Or lie and gather more evidence to out the cult and expose them to the world.

This is how I do my thing.
​

I've got a lot of ideas I have bouncing around for the stories I write. But most times things sync with my common focal point of interest.

1) have a message
2) make it epic as fuck (martial arts, magic, high tech weapons, mix it all in, make it a huge world, have plenty of worlds to go to)
3) make sure to make character attractive in looks and in depth of character
4) find a balance, not too much action so story isn't cared for, and not too much drama that action is nonexistent
5) blur the lines but don't cross them (as in kids can die or be hurt, I write for adults and older teens, but I don't do rape or too many other super dark stuff, the point is hope and learning)

I like telekinesis. I like martial arts. I like space. I like magic. I like long quests the traverse a whole planet. Or several like Star Ocean games do. And I don't mean, pop over to a planet, visit one town, then get to a dungeon, the leave planet. No. No way. TRAVERSE THE WHOLE PLANET DAMN IT! (lol)

I would even go so far as to have the detective and his allies outside the department kill the kid. WAY before the end. And this, despite the outcry of the community and being labeled public enemy number one, they continue to try and expose the rest of the cult so no new zealots pop up.

My only problem is, I only wonder if people will see the messages I'm trying to put out there. Especially since games like Xenogears have tried to show the problems with government, religion, and arrogance can get you. But then again, it's not like it's a message that can be told a different way for new audiences.

Altireior motives for self gain. (new here is this right place to reply)? profile human behavioras select few continue. in a group . we have those who run from danger & those who run to danger the traits that develope these that seperates us from being the same . desirable or not.. children aised alone (phyciatrist ) states there spoiled brats . dont share . through temp tantums.never think of any one but selves. see a mom dad 7 kids these are master minipulaters do all lives get out in wold think it all ok just the nom . wow. vanity. to talk about personal even some combine all of them focust is just them not a person or all in geneal. see vindidive retaliation defencive tactics wow. 2 minute story then 4 hours work ok. plan . what fk (drama yell scream all bout. we should be working. 4 hours yell fight over 2 minute story . .They didnt like to work... hhhmmmmm. now see . (text) over over same. some vow not work dirty hard nasty dangerous . so lets do it other way yea I special. con trick decive fool. my way through life. (pimp) comes in handy when girl give 5 hours gets 15 bucks. no tip after she did all kinds every thing special she could do...strangers in the night exchange glances stangers in nite romaning 2 strangers in the nite take chances for love.. kid that burn self hot stove knows what hot stove is now. he never do it again.. yet the one who was told not to touch is curious. oh can really be that bad I dont think this hurt bad say I think take chance. wolf in sheep skin. this strange danger seems ok(poll servey) 65-70 females are hurt tramatized accousted sexualy before age 16.pedifile stawker molester incest pervs.date rape drugs booze , prostatution porn sex slave human trafficing big revenew for those who refuse to get dirty hard nasty dangerios work. girl s 18 she not minor, 500 million porn vids out all these 18 yr olds are experts profecinals they start back 11 -12 how many need to be arrested 50 guilty per child 500 million. we need lot jails. (pop) control think of 18 yr old virgins. not your child hood sweet heart or daughter. tell the man she just wedding he all excite costamate wed vows she tell him her secret she been raped sex 11 yrs old 2000 guys 5 at time. hates sex born dont like it. wow scream yell terafingpoor boy life over. find me some body to love (war sexes) men
then the evil one crept up sweep away with her.Natives. slaughter. woman all took by enemy. Mexicans. Alamo Texas cal land grab. woman taking by enemy. china hong kong million slaved railroads woman take by enemy. Africans action off jamaca. walk one content next body accrost water concitered none human. woman taken by enemy south america myan inca tribe gold woman same took be thir enemy . this all adds up to females are under attack.their highest suicidal rate ever rise. think value vurtue virginity gone lost (flip) suicidal tendancys.(breack time ) help edit

 

[intityofenergy]

Altireior motives for self gain. (new here is this right place to reply)? profile human behavioras select few continue. in a group . we have those who run from danger & those who run to danger the traits that develope these that seperates us from being the same . desirable or not.. children aised alone (phyciatrist ) states there spoiled brats . dont share . through temp tantums.never think of any one but selves. see a mom dad 7 kids these are master minipulaters do all lives get out in wold think it all ok just the nom . wow. vanity. to talk about personal even some combine all of them focust is just them not a person or all in geneal. see vindidive retaliation defencive tactics wow. 2 minute story then 4 hours work ok. plan . what fk (drama yell scream all bout. we should be working. 4 hours yell fight over 2 minute story . .They didnt like to work... hhhmmmmm. now see . (text) over over same. some vow not work dirty hard nasty dangerous . so lets do it other way yea I special. con trick decive fool. my way through life. (pimp) comes in handy when girl give 5 hours gets 15 bucks. no tip after she did all kinds every thing special she could do...strangers in the night exchange glances stangers in nite romaning 2 strangers in the nite take chances for love.. kid that burn self hot stove knows what hot stove is now. he never do it again.. yet the one who was told not to touch is curious. oh can really be that bad I dont think this hurt bad say I think take chance. wolf in sheep skin. this strange danger seems ok(poll servey) 65-70 females are hurt tramatized accousted sexualy before age 16.pedifile stawker molester incest pervs.date rape drugs booze , prostatution porn sex slave human trafficing big revenew for those who refuse to get dirty hard nasty dangerios work. girl s 18 she not minor, 500 million porn vids out all these 18 yr olds are experts profecinals they start back 11 -12 how many need to be arrested 50 guilty per child 500 million. we need lot jails. (pop) control think of 18 yr old virgins. not your child hood sweet heart or daughter. tell the man she just wedding he all excite costamate wed vows she tell him her secret she been raped sex 11 yrs old 2000 guys 5 at time. hates sex born dont like it. wow scream yell terafingpoor boy life over. find me some body to love (war sexes) men
then the evil one crept up sweep away with her.Natives. slaughter. woman all took by enemy. Mexicans. Alamo Texas cal land grab. woman taking by enemy. china hong kong million slaved railroads woman take by enemy. Africans action off jamaca. walk one content next body accrost water concitered none human. woman taken by enemy south america myan inca tribe gold woman same took be thir enemy . this all adds up to females are under attack.their highest suicidal rate ever rise. think value vurtue virginity gone lost (flip) suicidal tendancys.(breack time ) help edit

go back history to 11th centure look up till of the hun ghane Khan. mongolians rode horses to be man child had to get horse take care of it train it then lean ride try win a race 1000s others all compeate one 1 got get girl finnaly. cant take care horse why have girl. ? ghan Khan had 2000 children so well liked his army grew so fast went to his head got out hand he started take over the world fast too. (opinion ass hole yep) we all got one. this shake up the worldfree mason secret socioty europe with britsh spain france germany russia irerland italy join to stop mr Khan riot on our world. kill or be killed they say/. hitler holacast jews. ships to indea came back word (lute) > 70 < ship full gold silver diamonds spices food opium popi seed they took itally where house full for distrabutin . 1500s (who?) contropl epademic. today. with sex slave human trafficing. females porn prostaution revenue. in trillions. south america hong kong china white opium dens now under british rule brazil rio d, canada U.SA 1700s (gang of new york) movie we all undesireable criminal thugs europe . brought to work as slaves so over crowded rich plantation owners. bosten tea party paul rever bunker hill 4th of jule next mo.. is crok sorry. dont stand football. but. british never left. they own austraila carabian partorico virgin islands they have the world. power secret controled. using u.s.a. as undercover force. sure we kick out but rich europe still here plantation owners this there land there people they came back . with our 16 pressident who assasinated keep from talking. cival war. distraction. more deid all wars combined. 1st 15 presidents all demacrat no rep.. its ueuropian . not usa. so burst your bubble ... japan enemy isis enemy taaban afganastan' we surounded
who nuke japan. guess. wipe natives africans mexican. british free masons socioty conspiricy planed 400 yrs ago. kill or be kiled.....

honestly loook all up its true.. racist canyou see world all asin/ or mexican or only african people. truth needs to be brought out open. before usas k\get battle blood deasth while real culprets laughing. sweep under rug. I have alll right here see. 6 yrs face book

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[intityofenergy]

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