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Yeah, though due to logistics probably only if you're the one breeding her because
a) the snek pregnancy is via laying eggs
b) the PC is 95% of the time, a biped
c) I don't want to write a PC pregnancy for nagas only unless it's a specific request by the commissioner
So snek baby can happen but with some caveats.
Yeah but the idea of the PC laying an actual egg from her (or his) womb is pretty alien in a very literal sense when every other pregnancy they go through is live birth except for the aliens that put their non-fertilized eggs inside you like Nyrea, or lay them wherever in your body. Actually creating an egg inside you then laying it is pretty strongly against the grain and weird. Of course, there might be a sexual angle to explore there given that being forced to carry her egg(s) despite your biology is like a form of domination in itself, but I dunno.
There already is a pregnancy where the pc produces eggs regardless of their body type. Raskvel can impregnate you with sperm and the eggs develop naturally. The frostwyrm can do the same. I think the idea that the pc can produce eggs if they are impregnated by an egg laying race was assumed as valid in Fen games.
The same could happen in COC with basilisks and Benoit if I recall correctly.
Still, you are the author and it is your character so it should be your decision.
Hmm, fair enough. Just wasn't aware of any prior examples. I stand corrected, then; should probably be okay.
@Wsan I noticed a few errors in the Patron doc for Lost in Space Ausar edition but the doc wasn’t set up for suggestions. Just some small stuff like there were two references to the queen “tiptoeing” to give you a kiss and the princess doing the same. Should probably be a height check in both instances.
Thanks. I don't take public edits/comments on my documents, but noted; the writing in some of it is extremely old and before I knew much about TiTS stuff. I'll rectify it the next time I'm working on it.
For today's writing, I present you with another small preview of a Patreon doc, this one from the Syri/Milomom/Milodaughter/PC 4some (100% no incest involved). It's about a milodan fertility priestess and her daughter.
If you've read Savin's story posted on the blog a little while back, you'll recognise these two characters. If not, here's your chance. https://www.fenoxo.com/story-the-thiccness-from-outer-space/
Gonna make a start on the Lund stuff and work through this month's Patreon comms, probably!
Did you remove the third Amber story from the Patreon or was it just a figment of my imagination?
That might have been the story I was going to write but instead switched to commissions that month.
Oh, there is. I must have forgotten to post it down in the archive after deleting the Patreon post, lol. It's my September story. I'll go paste it back in.
I've now officially started the "Lund doesn't Fuck Off" expansion, wherein you tell him to Fuck Off the moment you meet him and he gets mad about it - surprising, I know. This is intended to be a massive commission. I have no idea what Lund's current wordcount is thanks to me working across like 7 different documents because I hate scrolling, but this will probably be 30k or more words. You can check out the start of it on my Patreon if you'd like to preview the content; I have the skeleton up so you can get a good look at what most of his content's going to be like. There'll be multiple loss scenes before you're properly broken in and conversely, you will also be able to break him down via combat and set him upon the submission path (if we can make that work. I know geddy did some rearranging of Lund's code to make it less of a mess, so we'll see). Either way, you'll be able to make him your bitch or become a bitch yourself.
Sweet. I've been hoping for something like that ever since Miranda's and FoE's development stopped.
Oh, a fellow Miranda fan. Fuck, I miss that character. There were a couple of things I really loved about FoE and she was one of them. The intro was one of the others.
Yup, I'm usually not into furry characters, but every one of her scenes were so hot. She's probably my favourite character in the whole Fen branch of smut games. Kia was so sweet as well. How about Lagon, the rapey-dommy rabbit king? He seems right up your alley.
Why did FoE’s development stop? I’ve never been able to figure that out cuz Alkahest seemed to just disappear after that.
Hey Wsan I'm sorry if I'm turning into "that guy", but do you have an estimate of how long the Lund expansion would take? Cause I'm just so hype for it man, 30k words, say at rate of 2-3k a day, that put it somewhere in early to mid January? Please tell me it's close... I'll write it myself if need be but PLEASE don't deny me this!!
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He was cool but Miranda was far and away my fav part of it.
It was Alder, not Alkahest, and it was because he wanted to take a break. He's still around these days and doing stuff, just not game stuff.
It's not even your commission bud, calm down. It's going to take months. I have plenty of other commitments that come before finishing it.
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