Recent content by Sparr

@Kirorororo Just a quick update: My submission at number 22 officially has 27 pages, contrary to the 22 that you have listed up there.

Holy shit, I actually managed to finish writing the whole thing. I'm kind of proud of myself, even if Savin rates my entry a 0 again. There's only one scene I didn't get to include but it was just one of the sex scenes and at least I got the other three done in the nick of time. Reposting the...

Just for the sake of my sanity, I'm putting up my submission a little early. As of posting this, I've still got just a few scenes left to write but I beliiiiieve we still have yesterday to finish and polish. But just to make sure I don't end up forgetting to post it, here is my submission. (And...

I... actually really enjoy this idea. Thank you muchly! Now let's hope that I don't rush it and make it next to unusable like my Halloween submission.

Ugh. I've been staring at this thing for too long. It's not finished but after working on it, I can't even tell if it's any good anymore. Anyone mind telling me if it looks like it would be a good submission for the contest and, of course, and grammatical or tense edits I should make...

I would suggest using it more sparingly. Although in the text it looks fairly spaced, within the dialog, she says it fairly close to the other time that she said it. A more natural dialogue doesn't use pet names or real names very often when speaking one on one with someone in a chit-chat...

I'm glad you liked her! And yeah, it was horribly rushed. Right down to the wire. Not only did I have more written for the one scene that she had but also other sex options and then three other characters planned out that had their own routes. Of course, it wasn't possible to actually write all...

Aye, did anyone like Absynth from my entry? Even if mine doesn't win any of the contest, I might try to write some content for her if people like her at all.

I wish I had started earlier and had been able to add the routes and scenes that I wanted. Originally, there were four separate characters, all having multiple choices that could be made. And of course, if I had taken my time, I definitely could have written at least the one scene I did manage...

I had so many more ideas for these scenes but unfortunately I started far too late and ran out of time. There were at least two more sexy characters that I was going to add. I may write up some additional scenes in the future, especially something for a Tavros bar scene, if the staff decides to...