Recent content by PeevedPenguin

Alright, I hope you find the corrections useful. I'm honestly just happy to help contribute even if it is only a little bit.

I went over the document you posted and suggested some corrections of my own. I like the document so far. I was just wondering why you decided for the avian beak to have teeth and lips. Is it to make it more compatible with kissing scenes? Also, I'm bit unsure about just copying over the...