Recent content by NathanTrial

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    Getting the "writing groove" back with these stories

    Time for another scenario! The mansion estate Heartbroken, Alina calls up her best friend Jill and explains that her boyfriend just broke up with her. Upon hearing this Jill gets an idea but lets Alina vent about her feelings over the phone first. Once things are calmer and Alina's feeling a...
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    Getting the "writing groove" back with these stories

    Vallerie wanted to surprise Neal, her husband, by hiring a professional to give him a "special" massage for his birthday. She hid the gift card in one of the cabinets and hoped he wouldn't find it. A broken light bulb sent Neal searching through the house for a replacement and he found the card...
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    Getting the "writing groove" back with these stories

    Hi it's been a while since I've been able to post to these forums. I had written Zendra's Quest and it took a lot longer than I planned to get close to the end. Now that I have a bit of writing time I find that I don't have the same "spark" I did when I writing her quest before. So instead of...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    Time for the next part! Part XXX Zendra's waking up from her nap and sees that Bren and Ruall are just about to go to sleep. She waits a bit before getting up to make sure they're asleep and goes into the kitchen and warms up some milk to help her get some more sleep. She sneaks back into...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    I've been delayed from writing this next part several times but I've finally got some time tonight and tomorrow to write some more! Part XXIX Zendra's resting on the balcony after the hot fuck she had with Ruall. He's showering up and she's contemplating over what Hadril's going to do. She...
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    Is there a place to report minor errors in the writing?

    How to report typos is explained in this thread https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/reporting-bugs.404/
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    Net Neutrality

    Dumb business decision or not the unfortunate reality is that it wouldn't even be an issue if no company wanted to do it. So in the unlikely scenario Congress lets the vote stay there's bound to be some ISP out there that'll start doing the fees. However I think Congress will overturn the vote...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    Next part because I can't sleep! Part XXVIII It's been three months and Zendra's tried to escape to no avail. Ruall's kept her well fed but hasn't allowed her many liberties. No clothing at all. She hasn't even had sex during the lockup. Closest she got was trying to seduce Bren with a...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    I've got time for another part now, it's just going to be a story part this time. Part XXVII Zendra and Ruall arrive at his place. They arrive at a condominium. Ruall grabs Zendra and they take off flying onto the balcony for his place. It's a penthouse suite overlooking Luminous Island with...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    Part XXVI Both Calira and Bren sit in nearby chairs, recovering from that intense fuck. Zendra's so tired she just stays tied up like that. It's when they're all cooling down from the experience that someone enters the room clapping as he walks in. It's Ruall. "You three put on quite a...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    Got time for another part tonight! Also this part got a bit too wordy so I'm splitting it up into two. Part XXV It's two days later, in the afternoon, and Zendra gets ready to meet up with Bren again at his warehouse. She's dressed well for the occasion wearing a silk blue dress, given to her...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    I've got time to write another part now! Part XXIV It's right after Zendra, Bren, and Calira had "gotten to known eachother" and they get to talking. Zendra finds out that Calira was actually Bren's ex-wife. They met during a vacation and married before finding out they were cousins. When...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    Time for the next part! Part XXIII It's after breakfast and part of the morning package was a change of clothes. Zendra puts on her new white dress and Bren puts on his new suit. Bren gives her an address to meet him again tomorrow and they say their goodbyes. She goes into the carriage...
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    Zendra's Quest (criticism welcome)

    So my free time ended up being a lot later than 9pm due to other matters. So I can only write 1 part tonight. I'll likely be writing another part tomorrow though! Part XXII Zendra wakes up the morning after her night with Bren. She's still in the room with him and she sees that Bren's still...