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    [CONTEST] Merry Jizzmas Writing Contest Entries Thread

    Here's my entry where Kase offers himself to you as a Christmas present. I tried asking HugsAlright to see if it was ok for me to use Kase, but I didn't hear anything back in over a week, so I am posting it. I tried my best to use more parsers this time...
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    !!!!!!! Really? Did Savin say anything about it? What did fen say? I don't have a Discord, so I can't see.... And there weren't any new comments on my entry.
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    Yeah, sorry, I didn't know, thanks for correcting me.
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    I hadn't read her's (? I'm guessing Adjatha is a girl. If not: sorry.) fully yet, but now that I have... I love the writing style and descriptions, the Parser usage was well done, and the story was well written. I just don't really like the TF's for it? That and the story is just... not my...
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    When I was writing mine, since I've been playing Fen's games for years, I kept comparing mine to existing scenes in the game. And (mostly for my first path) I kept telling myself "this feels like I'm writing fan fiction" (especially cause I haven't written stories since middle school). So...
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    I didn't know that you had one written! Sorry! I hope they put yours in as a species and #5 as a quick way to change to it/ sex-scene. I'm so glad you think so! It's honestly my first time writing this kind of stuff, so it's nice to hear people actually liking it. Fen responded, he said he...
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    @Kirorororo i liked entry #5 the drider/spider suit, looked like fun.
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    I changed what needed to be changed, and took it off editing, so it's comments only. I fully know and accept that I was an idiot, and honestly am not looking for anyone to get punished (not that I could anyway, changes were made anonymously). I just wanted to let him know that my entry was not...
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    Can people just shoot him a message? Like, isn't he busy as hell and not likely to read those? I'll still probably try, but i am worried about seeming like I am pestering him.
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    I just switched it over again. Some of the edits have been good though, helping with typos and the like, but others.... yeah, I should have listened. I just hope it wasn't read while those changes were made.
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    Someone popped into mine and rewrote parts to allude to the shortsword being a "child tf" in my story. But I don't want child stuff in this one, AND the rules for writing say no shota/loli stuff. can i take it off of editing now so no one changes it again, or would fen and others need it on edits?
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    " numbers in red do not seem to include halloween theme/Poe A/horror or are currently incomplete (do tell me if I overlooked something because I might have missed the halloween part if it was discreete)"
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    @Zareidriel Honestly, yours does look interesting. It's just an unfortunate circumstance we used such a similar name with the costume. And yours at least used a lot more code and parser usage than I did. @Kirorororo I was actually curious about the spell check/ missing words thing too. While...
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    Trials in Tainted Space Hallowiener Spunktacular Submission Thread

    Here. Its been switched over to editing. (I'm pretty sure. I haven't used google docs in years.) I'm not quite sure how to change it to "suggesting" for other viewers though https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cx-S4g1YpsvAhdo98XjRLRSW1ufWwUmb_sFGDhyQPRM/edit?usp=sharing
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    Trials in Tainted Space Hallowiener Spunktacular Submission Thread

    @Kirorororo yeah, my entry is complete. I'm a new enough writer to not really know what to change and how to improve the story, but I have enough experience with other stuff to know that if I start making last minute changes that i could make it worse. So it's done.