Recent content by Dolphi

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Thanks! I wanted to add more but i kinda feel that its cooler to have actual scenes rather than 100 flavour profiles so i only added the 2 i thought were funny. I definitely want to add this in too alongside a bunch more stuff (i wanted New Texas to have some scenes too) but i think ill submit...

Alright its finished, im going to submit this now as i've looked over it numerous times and i think it should be fine.

Alright I've fixed the doc so that people can leave comments and suggestions now, so feel free to leave any criticisms or suggestions either here or on the doc itself (though i prefer this thread).

I thought the venom had to be ingested to take effect so kissing worked but licking someones arm doesn't? Edit: alright i changed it

Honestly im not sure if im correct about this but i mostly use doc notes for errors like grammar or paragraphs not making sense and i use the forum for general critique. So i guess if its spelling mistakes id prefer it go in the docs, whereas if its general critique id rather it go here. Also...

So... Is my writing okay? Does anyone have any feedback?

Also what did you think about the doc? Yea im playing around with a bunch of ideas and i thought maybe i could add in her mom. For now its a placeholder though, since i plan to do 6 scenes only. Maybe if i add more or make a second round of scenes ill add in her mom if people want it?

Oh no, hang on lemme try to fix this Its been months since i've uploaded a docs file so im kinda rusty ahha Edit: I think link sharing was disabled for some reason, but I turned it on again so you should be able to read the doc now. That was embarrassing

Also known as Extrameat! Geddit? Hello everyone, I've recently started writing again and one of the things I realized is that Extrameet has a bunch of scenes, but it could really use a bunch more. So I asked Frosty if i could write new scenes for Extrameet and they said yes. Unlike previous...

Yeah thats a great idea actually, getting to write a new character thats just one scene for extrameet. Alright ill check if thats actually viable, then maybe i'll write that with everyones ideas here (Like that M/M, femdom or crossdressing idea?) Thanks everyone.

Hey guys Im thinking of scrapping the entire poem mechanic and just making it a souvenir thing where you get different scenes based on what you give her. For example, giving her Zil Honey might have you two exploring a zil related area and giving her Naleen nip would unlock exploring a Naleen...

Does anyone have anything approvable they want written E.g A scene for a character or something like that. I wanna try writing small stuff so i figured this thread would be perfect for this.

Alright everyone, so far im up to the scene where you go on a trek with Calla and god did i underestimate the work recquired. I constantly have to go back to the start of the document to update my writing, and reading the first draft made me feel like just deleting the document. I am genuinely...

Oh i see. Does that mean you cant actually interact with her with a bimbo/brute character? In that case is there a way to remove the brute/bimbo status? I would also just like to say that Bianca is an absolutely phenomenal character and i really loved the writing. Thank you William :)