Embry is an interesting character, and it's great someone is willing to write more of her story. It will be interesting to see what stuff is added when all's said and done - even if it's not everything I'd like.
While I love Urta and Cotton from CoC, my issue was the sheer SIZE of their cocks - I mean fantasy is all well and good, but there's a limit to how much I can suspend my disbelief.