Feedback wanted on Quest Idea I want to write

NoobNoob

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I like writing. A lot. So of course I have been going through a porn rpg game screenshot saving any mention of things to be used for plot ideas. Of course that means I know about the half-gnoll from missing Meows that has no content, the Maidenbridge stuff with Lusmine or that whole Drider Queen thing. So of course my first proposal is of course none of that.
Instead I wanted to propose a quest chain with Kazuo and Darius.

(Which is the first reason I am posting this - I don't know all of Observers plans (if any) with these characters and since they were last active in 2024 on this forum, I am relying on the deep lore known by some you to let me know if this is dead in the water or not)

First quest - "Touching Grass" Triggers after completing all of Nakano's quests. When talking with Rindo you get a new option, in which she worries about Kazuo never leaving his lab, even for big social events. Based on Kohaku's stories and your actions, she wonders if there are outsiders that he might have easier time connecting with compared to normal kitsune society. Champion wonders if this is her own original idea or Komari putting the idea in her head because she knows you would have trouble saying no to your cute but damaged Rindo - especially if she is your concubine. If you agree, you drag (how literal this is probably depends on silly mode or not). Time to introduce to other crafting weirdos. I imagine the requirements would only need to be two others and the temple crew but you could complete the list if you want to see all the interactions.
Zuzaan, Wynne/Berwyn & Matilda (will need to have several variants to account for Matilda's revenge outcomes), and Vivinne. All try to flirt with Kazuo but he does not notice at all. All take the champion to the side after the conversation to let you know that Kazuo seems like a lovely chap such a shame THAT HE'S COMPLETELY INSANE. Still both characters walkaway with some new ideas on their current projects and enable a brief scene of letters being delivered from any of them at the Kitsune Den.
Nieves - don't have a good enough feel of the character and will take suggestions on how that scene will play out. I am debating on something like the above for those who don't have Matilda but that would get tiresome who do have Matilda. Maybe only have her trigger if Matilda is gone from the game?
Lyric - Lyric enjoys expanding their knowledge of science. Kazuo enjoys having such an enthusiastic assistant. Explosions happen and nobody else is happy. The Champion reflects that this was not their best idea while ducking and covering underneath furniture.
Sven - Turns out grease monkeys and plant boys don't get along. Enables a scene showing they have an acrimonious and competitive penpal relationship after their meeting.
Barney and Darius - This turns out great. They really getting along. So much that after the champion goes through several waiting screens, they decide to drag Kazuoo back home before Kass finishes taking over the world, Ryn dies of old age, and Arona grows some wrinkles on her brain. (Ideally the last two lines will change depending on who your companions are)
With that quest finished.

Next Quest
That's One Big Lizard - Barney, Darius, and Kazuo get the grand idea of using some of the energy the temple is helping to vent into additional defenses from the town. Which is why a cute lizard from the foothills is now stomping around and breathing totally not radioactive fire breath. The Champion engages in battle to drive it off into the foothills but can't defeat the totally not Godzilla on their own. Regrouping at Garth's place, the champion is talking through plans when Ninian pops out of the mug of beer that he was drinking. (I am debating if this quest needs to have Ninian in Hawkthorne to trigger or if Garth will make talk about knowing something about this but he would need to ask a pixie for more dialogue, sending you to hunt through the Old Froest to find Ninian). Either way, Ninian recounts knowing how to contact two pixies who are connected to a powerful Moth spirit how could help.
Go to the designated spot Old Forest and you will meet two twin fairies who can help you summon not-Mothra. However they need some help. Either you help them remember the song to summon Mothra (thinking of a word association or rhyming based puzzle here) or you go and collect some items they need for the ceremony. (Another way to complete the step for those who don't like puzzles) Either way, you summon Not-Mothra who is of course a sexy moth lady. Optional sex scene here with some druggy spores and light bondage with string shot. Either way, you go down to the foothills to fight Not-Godzilla, weakening them enough to wrap up in a cocoon by not-Mothra and taken off to live the rest of their lizard life on Kaiju island. The champion and companions watch while discussing if they were want to visit Kaiju island. Return to the temple to report job well done and be worried about the fact that Kazuo is trying to sell the idea that the champion needs a giant mech.

Possible relationship: Post - That's One big Lizard. Because this is (though nominally at times) a porn game and well, the quests above is a bit lacking in the porn department. The idea would be the add on scenes of the Champion spying on Darius and Kazuo when Darius finally just decides to screw subtlety and actually see if Kazuo would be up for a relationship. This would require a few things. 1. That people besides me would want this. 2. That Kazuo at least be a gray-ace 3. That Daris be sapiosexual enough to ignore his femininity requirements. (At least he fulfills the body tone requirements) Probably can be explained that no matter how high the Champion's cunning is, they are still a horny idiot at the end of the day compared to other smart characters in the setting. (I might be thinking too seriously about this part for a game with a silly mode). If all three of those are fine, then a variety of scenes could be written. How much is smut and how much is relationship fluff probably depends on how many of you are normal people and how many of you are disgusting perverts who like wholesomeness.

ETA: Any feedback is appreciated, because I want this to be as completely thought out as possible before pestering Savin with it.
 

Nyx_Arach

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I really like the first section, the whole getting him to meet the other nerds and crafters of the world would be a good time, he could become a temporary camp follower for the duration, allowing the champ to get to know them better. However the second part is totally out there... but let me preface by saying I enjoy the idea.

I haven't spoken to Darius enough beyond initial introductions, but I don't think he and Barney would do anything that could potentially put Cait, her temple, Hawkesthrone and everyone else at risk - Kazuo being involved however... makes the idea more plausible - perhaps angle it with the idea he was going to do it anyway, they decided to get involved to stop it going too crazy (it didn't help.)
As for the relationship side to it - I can't speak much as my interactions with Darius are minimal atm so I don't know what his preferences are - but the idea of him forming a close professional relationship with Kazuo - as well as Kazuo forming connections with other crafters across the Marches is a good idea.
To my current knowledge - I believe all Kitsune content (with some exceptions) falls under tobs (i may be wrong) so it may best to reach out to them in regards to the character Kazuo themselves.
But all in all - the idea is a good one, if a little wacky in the whole Godzilla reference.
 
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NoobNoob

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Thanks for the input - I play the game in silly mode exclusively, so the dawnsword quest turned into a whole star wars joke. The trick would be to flavor the regular enough to be less whacky compared to silly version. (Which make references to even more Godzilla weirdness).
Darius doesn't really have a lot of content on his own, which I why I picked him.

If Kazuo is a temporary camp follower, what interactions would you have besides talking? Maybe an interaction for temp buff (or make it evenen dicer, temp b uff, temp debuff or nothing happening)

The good news is that first quest can written and implemented without the second part. I felt the need to pitch both to have a more talky/interaction based quest versus a more action one.

Maybe the Godzilla is a result of the Champion walking in during a delicate moment and speaking everyone because they were so focused? Would definitely have them working to drive Godzilla off before he gets closer to town then.

As mentioned I know theobs is the person I need to run this by, but I literally don't know how to reach him outside the forum. (His status shows last active 2024) Does he have a discord I can track down? An address for carrier pigeons?
 

Nyx_Arach

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I'm not sure how to reach tobs, I know there's a Discord link on the Fenoxo homepage, so I'd try joining and seeing if they're there. If that doesn't work, maybe try asking Savin directly as to how to get ahold of tobs.

Personally I would have the interactions be the usual talk, then have an option as to how he can help since the roads are dangerous, he could offer use of his puppets in exchange for feeding (in a non-sexual way) - which you could use as a single use item - maybe implement a way to upgrade them by donating wood, stone and metal (with things getting more complex post-quest - giving things like winterstem allows them to heal, ice rose and glowing ice shard to give ice abilities and damage, etc) - this could be kept for future interactions, since I don't think he can be encountered outside of small scenes in the Den.
Then the obvious option would be to flirt........only for it to go completely over his head. Something I myself would find funny is if you flirt with him, after you finish the second quest, he just turns around and suddenly it smacks him in the face and he flat out asks. "Were you flirting with me?"

As for Darius - I think any future content for him will arrive after Tychris is added - so again a discussion with tobs if you can get ahold of them.

The overall quests sound good, the idea of Champion being the unintentional catalyst for the rise of Not-Godzillia sounds good - they step into as many messes just by walking through a field - so it works that walking through a door would also cause them grief. XD
 

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I am going to have to steal all of the suggestions, including him only realizing afterwards you were flirting with him. I'll message Savin later today after church (what a thing to type on this forum) and see if Savin can help.
Have to decide on the base stats of a simple puppet before we get to upgrades and customization.
 
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I am going to have to steal all of the suggestions, including him only realizing afterwards you were flirting with him. I'll message Savin later today after church (what a thing to type on this forum) and see if Savin can help.
Have to decide on the base stats of a simple puppet before we get to upgrades and customization.
HELP! I'VE BEEN ROBBED BY A CHURCH-GOER! XD
 
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Nyx_Arach

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I am going to have to steal all of the suggestions, including him only realizing afterwards you were flirting with him. I'll message Savin later today after church (what a thing to type on this forum) and see if Savin can help.
Have to decide on the base stats of a simple puppet before we get to upgrades and customization.
On a serious note. Perhaps use the stats from the Artifice quest - just scale them up a wee bit.