Summoners Brothel

Jash

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So, I've started writing my first porn game, just a short text-only choose-your-own-adventure type. I'm making it in Twine 2.


As the name may or may not suggest, it's based on mega-popular MOBA League of Legends, and is pretty much what you'd expect from a game with a name like 'Summoners Brothel'- your nameless character visits a brothel where all the sexiest and hottest female champions whore themselves out whenever they're not on the Fields of Justice. There's a bit of meta-humour involved, but the basic gist of the game is going into the brothel and picking a girl who you have a sex scene with, the end. There's a bit of other content as well that may take a few different routes to get through, but I'm keeping it pretty simple because I suck at any kind of complicated coding and don't really have the inclination to learn it- I just want to write. The intent is to make something more like Grenish Meadows than CoC or TiTS.


So I'm making this thread just to get some preemptive feedback and advice (at least SOME of you must have played LoL and thought at one stage or another "man I'd love to motorboat Sona's gorgeous titties!"). Content is flexible, I'd ideally like to include as many of my favourite girls in the game as I can in some form or another (although not all with be fuckable, some will just be making cameos) and I can keep writing and adding more and more to the game for as long as I can be bothered. First thing I'd like to know: what girls would you like to see most in the game? I've got a few penned in already and a few also pretty much ruled out, but I can try to be flexible.


Content guidelines:


*Most of the content will be pretty vanilla, with most of the variation being based on the girls' personalities. The story is about visiting a brothel, so you won't be allowed to do anything nasty like rape (the bouncer is Sion and he doesn't take kindly to troublemakers). I personally have a very healthy respect for working girls and don't like seeing them abused. Not to say that there won't be femdom or even futa if people want it and I can identify which champions would be best suited to that kind of material.


*No gay. No, not even Ezreal. Got nothing against gay people (hell, I'm technically bi) but I just don't know how to write that kind of content.


*There's no character customisation (wouldn't know how to do it) so choices within scenes will be relatively limited. Your character is male and fairly ordinary, a total nobody, not a male LoL champion.


*There can be monstergirl content if people indicate they want particularly to see Cassiopeia or Soraka (or possibly Elise). I might stretch it to including Nami. I will NOT write scenes for Anivia or Rek'Sai- just way too difficult. Also, because I'm trying to keep things at least remotely within the bounds of LoL's (admittedly rather flexible) canon, I won't write Lamb in (as much as I'd like to)- there's no way you can find the avatar of death working in a brothel. I am, however, planning on writing something for Orianna at some stage, although she might be a bit delayed (she's a rather difficult prospect).


*It goes without saying, but I will definitely NOT write a scene for Annie (well, I might write her a comedic little cameo, but there's no way she'll be having sex). No, I won't even age her up to "teen Annie".


*At the moment the following characters are ruled out because I'm using them for other purposes that prevent you from screwing them: Kayle, Quinn, Diana, Tristana, Lulu, Katarina. I may, if there's enough demand, add a way to get a scene with some of them later in development.


*The following characters are first in line for love scenes: Poppy, Caitlyn, Ahri & Sona, Riven. Mostly everything after that will be dependent on feedback I receive.


Now, since this is my first project, I'd also like to ask a bit of advice.


*Firstly, where can I most easily host it? I'd like it to be playable online (like, say, Boobjitsu Matriarch) , but I have a chronic aversion to signing up for things if possible (just bear with me, OK?). Obviously I'll need to sign up for SOMETHING, but I'd like to find the right one first time. What do you guys suggest?


*Uh, does anyone know how to type in small caps in Twine 2? YOU KNOW, LIKE THIS. I want to use it for Orianna's voice. I've looked through the guides, but can't find any way of doing it. While basic text effects like italics, bold and underline are easy, making bigger visual changes seems to be a lot of work and that's one I can't find even the VAGUEST description of how to do.


Feedback appreciated.
 
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Jash

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The only thing I can say is if in some point goes playable I would try it...

Well to be honest, depending on how much content I'd need to complete before it could be considered alpha-worthy (maybe complete routes for 2-3 girls?) I could have it in an at least trial-playable state within a couple of days. I've been having a lot of writers block recently with my (non-pornographic) writing, but this has really come to me rather easily.
 

Jash

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Well, uh, OK I expected a bit more of a response than this, but whatever. I won't be discouraged that easily.


I've actually spread the branches out a lot more since I started working, laying out frameworks for multiple girls' routes rather than actually writing their scenes so far (the only girl with any actual sexual content written for her so far is Poppy). Possibly this is overcomplicating things to the point where I'm biting off more than I can chew, but I like getting all my ducks in a line first, and it lets me jump around a lot between girls whenever I get even the slightest twinges of writers' block.


As a result, I've written (or at least set up) introductions/lead-ins (ensuring they will get scenes) for the following girls so far: Poppy, Caitlyn, Soraka, Evelynn, Cassiopeia, Shyvana, Riven, Orianna and Diana (yes, she was on the "will not appear" list before, but I came up with a way to write her into the game as a sort of Easter Egg instead). Girls I'm definitely planning on writing in (but haven't written introductions for yet) include Ahri and Sona (together), Leona, Irelia, Janna, Vi, Miss Fortune, Syndra, Fiora, Vayne, Akali and Morgana. Yes, I know I've pretty much mentioned every almost female champion in the game. What can I say, I love hot LoL girls.


Depending on how I go with it, I should have the first route (Poppy's) done in a day or two. I can't speculate for anything past that.
 

Nebula Fox

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As per your comment about not a lot of feedback, while a lot of people visit this subforum, it's certainly not the majority of users on this site, and another part of why you might not have much feedback is people like Nephilim, they want an actual playable demo of some kind, or at least a visual preview, before they give something they're input. Many games here, and to a greater extent many projects in the TiTS and CoC subforums never make it past the writing stage, which could be another reason so few people have stepped up to give you some feedback on your project.


As for suggestions, I don't know if these will help at all but I'll try my best:

  • Ahri would probably be focused on trickery and lavishment, maybe a bit of denial to get you ramped up before the big O, considering she feeds off of people's life forces, and your fluids seem like a handy substitute for the real thing.
  • Akali would, (in my personal opinion) be focused on pretty basic and vanilla sex. Her entire mantra is balance in all things, and I'd figure that missionary and such would be pretty balanced. Maybe have her sex scenes involve having both her and the PC (player character) come at the same time.
  • Anivia could be tricky, but probably your best bet would be to have her morph into a ice woman with wings, instead of having the PC fuck a giant bird. Example image here for reference.
  • Ashe would probably focus on a bit raunchier stuff than vanilla sex, maybe she really wants to get rough? After all, just because one is a queen doesn't mean they don't like to get dirty every now and then.
  • Caitlyn would probably focus on cop play, you're the 'big bad criminal' and she's finally caught you, so it's time to 'take you in'.
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  • - Zyra would probably be focused on anal, bondage, and/or tentacles.
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  • Longish post pending, still writing. I'll come back to this in an hour or two and finish this up.
 
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Jash

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OK, It's been over a week since my last post, bet you thought I'd lost interest and given up at the first hurdle, eh? No way (although work has slowed down a bit).


Status update: Poppy is almost done, Caitlyn is almost half-done (she has a split in her route so I'm going to have to write more for her), getting started on Soraka. I still don't have the ENTIRE framework done yet (the 'Stage' options and 'Sneak upstairs' options haven't been written in yet) but I have all the basic stuff done.


A little more detail on the general shape of the game may interest any LoL players (such as Nebula Fox; I recognise that profile pic of yours- sorry, but I still won't be adding Lamb unless there's OVERWHELMING demand for her): the "main" routes of the game see you enter the brothel, go to the waiting area and take your pick from the bulk of the girls. You're initially offered a number of categories to choose from to help narrow your selection down ("Dignified", "Wild", "Dominant", "Exotic" and "Inhuman", as well as a special alternate option) with most of the girls divided between these categories (Leona and Janna, for example, fall into Dignified, Vayne, Fiora and Syndra are Dominant, Vi and Miss Fortune are Wild, Akali and Nidalee are Exotic and you can probably guess which girls end up in Inhuman). That's where the bulk of the content is, but there are also a bunch of other things you can do rather than go for these options as you poke around the brothel, finding characters that aren't exactly "hidden" but generally aren't immediately obvious.


I'm trying to spread different amounts of content around the varying girls (spoilers for the sake of providing examples: Caitlyn does interrogation roleplay, Soraka is permanently lactating, Akali does both vaginal and anal, Syndra does magical bondage on you etc). I'll take suggestions if anyone can make them good, but I prefer them to be justified by the lore or their in-game mechanics (Akali, for example, does it both ways because of her "Twin Disciplines" passive).


Once again, can anyone suggest to me the most convenient place to upload a demo once I have one?
 

Marblak

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Hi there,


Longtime lurker, first time poster.


I'm liking this idea so far. I see a lot of people host their games off of Media Fire, and it seems to work out well.


As others have stated, this place gets a loooooot of unfinished, half baked, ideas that their creators abandon after a month. You will get a great deal more traction once you get a playable demo in here.


I feel like Syndra should have a ball fetish, as shes always tossing them around in league anyways.


I'd imagine there would be a demand for Cassiopizza, as the monstergirl fandom loves their lamias.
 

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Once again, can anyone suggest to me the most convenient place to upload a demo once I have one?

Just edit your first post and post it there. Make sure you create a new post though to tell people you've added a demo to the first post.
 

levant

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*There can be monstergirl content if people indicate they want particularly to see Cassiopeia or Soraka (or possibly Elise). I might stretch it to including Nami. I will NOT write scenes for Anivia or Rek'Sai- just way too difficult. Also, because I'm trying to keep things at least remotely within the bounds of LoL's (admittedly rather flexible) canon, I won't write Lamb in (as much as I'd like to)- there's no way you can find the avatar of death working in a brothel. I am, however, planning on writing something for Orianna at some stage, although she might be a bit delayed (she's a rather difficult prospect).

I'd be totally up for raka and cass. I kinda wish you would try anivia or rek, though. They're different, yeah, but that's the main draw.

As for Lamb; since this is seeming like a really short thing, you could have it be that she's not a brothel worker, but rather shows up when you're browsing the girls and tells you that it's your time to die. The sight of Wolf keeps you from fighting it, and Lamb's so glad that she won't have to hunt you down that she even rewards you with sex (at the same time probably making a joke about how Wolf's not the only one with an "appetite"). Technically you'd die, but you don't have to be killed. It could end with you just following Kindred into a white void. And even though you are dead, it doesn't matter because it'd end after you fucked the girl of your choice anyway, if I'm understanding this right; if nothing else you can have her just set to only be available for the "final round" or whatever
 
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I'm trying to spread different amounts of content around the varying girls (spoilers for the sake of providing examples: Caitlyn does interrogation roleplay, Soraka is permanently lactating, Akali does both vaginal and anal, Syndra does magical bondage on you etc). I'll take suggestions if anyone can make them good, but I prefer them to be justified by the lore or their in-game mechanics (Akali, for example, does it both ways because of her "Twin Disciplines" passive).

Janna needs to have some kind of oral fixation (she blows) and/or do dirty talk (her in-game joke)


LeBonk should bring in her clone


Miss Fortune wants your booty


Sej SNU SNU


Lux should do happy sex and/or ahegao


As much temptation as there is to have Illaoi do tentacle stuff, I'd rather see her punish the MC


Fiora should have some kind of endurance thing. Like, you're both trying to not be the first one to cum. She longs for a worthy opponent


Jinx brings in all sorts of "toys". I'm thinking electro-stim would fit well here if you're able and willing


Multiple orgasms is probably the best way to do justice to kat's status as the reset queen. Possibly you double-team her with garen? Idk


I'm thinking with Liss you should be completely entombed in her ice, unable to see anything and just your dick is hanging out for her to play with


I realize you're probably not going to, but if you let me be with shyvana's dragon form I'd love you forever.


Also I kinda wish you had kayle instead of morg
 

Jash

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Little update: Poppy's route completely done, Cait's over half-done (I've started work on BOTH sides of the split in her route simultaneously), started on Soraka's as well and it's coming along pretty well. I wonder if I might have been a bit excessively sappy with Poppy's route, but I guess it's acceptable- she's not one of the "standard" girls anyway. (So why did I write her first? Because I love shortstacks, that's why!)


Thanks for the feedback, some ideas I like there. I'm going to base the scenes on more than a single pun, though.

Janna needs to have some kind of oral fixation (she blows) and/or do dirty talk (her in-game joke)


LeBonk should bring in her clone


Miss Fortune wants your booty


Sej SNU SNU


Lux should do happy sex and/or ahegao


As much temptation as there is to have Illaoi do tentacle stuff, I'd rather see her punish the MC


Fiora should have some kind of endurance thing. Like, you're both trying to not be the first one to cum. She longs for a worthy opponent


Jinx brings in all sorts of "toys". I'm thinking electro-stim would fit well here if you're able and willing


Multiple orgasms is probably the best way to do justice to kat's status as the reset queen. Possibly you double-team her with garen? Idk


I'm thinking with Liss you should be completely entombed in her ice, unable to see anything and just your dick is hanging out for her to play with


I realize you're probably not going to, but if you let me be with shyvana's dragon form I'd love you forever.


Also I kinda wish you had kayle instead of morg

Janna will certainly give a great blowjob, but it won't be the central focus of her route. Since she normally floats everywhere (and her bare feet get a lot of focus) she's actually going to be one of two characters to give footjobs (the "nice" one; the other one will be Syndra who does a more dominating "stepping on your cock" dominatrix-style).


I actually forgot LeBlanc altogether. I think I'll use her as one (or actually as two) of the girls pole-dancing in the stage area when you first arrive. Getting to screw her will be a late-development addition I think, but it will involve the clone (although the clone is an illusion since LeBlanc so that could pose problems- maybe just play up how her illusions work on ALL your senses?).


MF needs more to go on than a fairly half-baked pirate pun. She's more likely to offer you HER booty instead. Might give her an extended hotdogging scene.


I like the idea for Fiora. That's a good one. Sej too, she'd definitely go in the 'Dominant' category- and since she used to be my main, I really shouldn't omit her.


Wasn't actually planning on featuring Lux, Jinx, Illaoi, or Lissandra, at least not initially. It occurs to me that Jinx could end up being a HIGHLY-demanded addition to the game- I forgot how popular she is. But her personality is problematic- no matter how wild she is in bed, I can't imagine her doing anything in a brothel that doesn't end in her burning it down. I need to stick at least vaguely to her character.


Kat is not actually screwable, at least not in my initial draft concept. There's an extended scene of you perving on her with Garen. Might do something else with it.


Sorry, really CAN'T do anything with Shyvana's dragon form for a similar reason I won't be including Rek'Sai- namely that she'd be bigger than the entire room (Rek'Sai is the size of a house, actually).


I DID have another idea for how you can screw Kayle (and Quinn as well) in a similar Easter Egg fashion to how I'm working Diana in, but that's REALLY making too much work for myself now. I've already set myself way too many goals as it is; whatever first version I release is already going to have about a dozen "NOT IMPLEMENTED" tags all over the choices. I'll keep it in mind.
 

Jash

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Just out of interest, how much content do you think I should get done before it's worth releasing the first demo? As I said, 1 route is already done and 2 more are coming along OK, but the game is going to have, in total, about 20-30 routes, maybe more if I get ambitious and don't burn out. I was thinking I may put out a playable demo (with, as already mentioned, a whole bunch of "NOT IMPLEMENTED" stickers all over it) once I'd completed Caitlyn and Soraka. Thoughts?
 

levant

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Yeah, 3-5 would be a good number for a demo.

And just like with my kindred reasoning, assuming that it's a limited number of girls per route, and that the game resets afterwards, it should be fine for jinx to blow the whole place up as she orgasms.


Also, I might be willing to write scenes for the non-humanoids for you, if I like the demo enough and you'd be willing to have a guest writer